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This is a good start. I have a few suggestions. I noticed that some of your words moved into the screen 'jerky' during the intro. I rewound after it loaded to make sure that you intended this and it wasnt a streaming problem... which is what it felt like to me..........
I dont know what to suggest as to how to make it work better, I could see where you were trying to work with the music, but somehow it didnt quite work for me.
The music is nice.. .I really liked it..... for a while. You should make sure that there is a way for ppl to turn the music off.
The intro was a bit long too. Even though ppl have the option of skipping it, for those of us who are interested in seeing your online 'presentation' you might consider refining it and slimming it down a bit.
Looks like you are still adding content. Again, over all, a nice beginning.
Keep on flashing.
Allison /Jasz
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smooth intro
Hey man.
Very nice intro, a little long but hey, no rules says it has to be short.
I liked the way it moves straight into the actual home page, very nice touch.
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