1.52 Site......eeeek (damn student)

[Mysty]

http://www.mysty.f2s.com

have a quick glance at that if you could and gimmeh some feedback pwease

Its far from finished, i just wanna know how bad/good it looks/plays.

Shouldnt take too long to load since its under 50k

Thanks in advance

- Si

oh, and because its in 1.52, it took me ages to get a decent playin text scroller

[Mysty]

this link seems to be workin better for me

http://www.sillyboy.f2s.com

seems like f2s is having "one of those days" again

- Si

[smalco64]

for a small app. Loads fast & a good example of a KISS site. One suggestions : try using the miniml fonts in here, they will come on sharper. You can find the downloadable fonts at :

http://www.orgdot.com/aliasfonts/
or
http://www.miniml.com/

Cheers,
Smalco

[jofta]

Pale blue on white...mmmmm.
This site is so well made ( I think ) that it deserves to be a little bit more obvious.
You know your stuff but your asking a lot of a person with average eyesite let alone poor... let alone an attitude that says "im prepared to give it a go"

Standard 53 miniml in a shade of black ( ie dark grey) would give you the muted look you seem to cherish but with a clarity that your viewer will thank you for.

Mouse actions> click here to go there stuff needs to be deleted where ever its not realy needed. First example is on the intro page why dont you have an auto redirect for those 90% of people that DO HAVE FLASH. (one mouse click gone) Why again do I have to click a blue pin head just to go to a another pinhead click choice.. eg click here to proceed to the site. Just give the viewer the site.

Small little elegant sites should flow and not expect the viewer to be nimble enough to find the little DOT let alone hit it.

Pale blue and white is like a sunny day with fluffy clouds...where does one start and the other finish.


Regards
Jofta
[Edited by jofta on 11-23-2001 at 08:04 AM]

[Mysty]

thanks for the feedback

I was a bit concerned about the colourscheme, and the size, and i think it'll have to change.

smalco, thanks for that great link, i'm downloading them all now

I know what you mean jofta about making the effort and less clicks, hence since the filesize was so slow i've had the idea of making a "lazy" option, with less clicks for those who want it.

I'll bang an auto redirect to the flash plug-ins page on the launch screen for all those who need it

Thanks again for the feedback

- Si