It works this time, I promise.

[Poopslngr]

http://www14.brinkster.com/poopslinger/poweb.html

Keep in mind that this is just the prelims of my site. Also keep in mind that I wanted to take a more artsy approach rather than the exhausted computer mainframe theme. In addition, I am a newb so go easy on me.


Constructive criticism, problem reports, suggestions all welcome. Thank you.

[clifgriffin]

Don't care for it. While your in this early stage, consider trying again. Doesn't feel professional at all.

Buttons shouldn't fly away like that when you click...annoying.

Things have a clunky/cartoony feel.

Too dark.


Sorry for being so harsh. Just my opinion, of course.

Good luck!

[ViperGeckoFreak]

Originally posted by clifgriffin
Don't care for it. While your in this early stage, consider trying again. Doesn't feel professional at all.

Buttons shouldn't fly away like that when you click...annoying.

Things have a clunky/cartoony feel.

Too dark.


Sorry for being so harsh. Just my opinion, of course.

Good luck!

unfortunatly i couldnt have reviewed it any better...

[label]

Well.. to start off.. You need to add a preloader of some sort. The Navigation is a little hard to understand. I have to agree about the color scheme. Its not very appelling. You need an on/off button for the music. I would recommend you play around with the colors a bit more. Work on some more aspects of the site. Everyone goes through this... its just one more step in the process of designing.
Sam

[Poopslngr]

Thanks for the feedback!

[flash_critic]

garbage....

[TrIzKuT]

this coming from the guy with NO website?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!
don't be an arse

[theswedishtiger]

Have to agree. Graphic squares with basic colors give it a amatuer feel. Flyaway buttons are not a good idea. Have a look at some of the showcased sites on FK to get design clues.

[Flamboyant Flasher]

I like ur innovativeness, but you instill som thoughts about efficiency and design when planning ur site...don't stop there...all the flashers arw down there...