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Thread: Constructive Criticism Needed

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    I've just started my site http://www.cecilwebster.com . I'm more or less trying to tweek out the feel and usability. As of yet (very) little content has been uploaded onto it, however, I'm REALLY after the overall feel it evokes and what exactly can be done to improve it. I'm particularly interested in finding out your response to the relationship and indentification of each page. Up to it? Of course. http://www.cecilwebster.com

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    Ryan Kallok: Kallok Studios kallok's Avatar
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    You need more content obviously.The navigation is unique and the colors are a nice choice.Maby add a little sound.

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    Senior Member Jeantje's Avatar
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    looks very good, but as kallok said, some sounds on the menu-system would make it alot better
    good work.

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    Your site goes here RedAbode's Avatar
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    i sucks $hit
    naww i'm j.k it's very nice and clean.. good job it seems like you have tryed to do this before untill u got this layout.. if thats the case good job for trying again..

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    Nice...indeed. As kallok said, add a sound fx would be better. Keep it up.


    Kevin

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    very slick, smooth animations on the menu. How about a preloader?

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    Thanks for the slick comments, but is it easily navigable? Are the pages easily identifiable? And as for the preloader comment....noted. I plan to put one on a bit later on in development. In the mean time, thanks for the constructive comments and please address the questions above. Thanks in advance.

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    very nice design

    1 change the nav bar sound
    add some content and I will rip your site a new *******

    jk

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    easily navigatable: yes
    pages easily identifiable: yes

    you might want to center it on the page as well as adding the preloader. Truly excellent!

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    Post Mo' Bills chook's Avatar
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    Looks really clean, and easy to navigate.

    How about maybe a funkier fonttype for your headings when you get to each section - foresee/cherish/live/create

    like the others said, a little bit of sound would give it even more ambience.

    chook

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