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    Here it is, or rather both of them. The link below takes you to my site called Crystal dreams, which is basically about me and my creations in art and animation. The second which you can find by clicking on the ROT link is about Ressurectors of Time, a creation of mine I hope to someday produce. On its site you can read some bios on the characters and catch the synopsis to the story. Enjoy!

    http://www.montgomerycountyschool.org/emhs/CD

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    COOL

    Nice art work. I liked the chalk drawing of the tiger a lot. You should try making a full blown movie like ninjai.com.

    -NITIN ANAND
    http://www.nanand78.com

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    Thanks

    Thanks, your stuff is pretty sweet too. I am working on the animation stuff. It takes awhile to get alot done on it with the time I have to work on it but it is coming. My first movie is going to be a music short about 3 and a half minutes long. A teaser of it is already on the site in animations but that version is a little rough quality and a bit dated now.

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    Colors

    I have had some people say that somethings on both my sites were a little hard to read due to coloring. Anyone else notice this?

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    I just checked out the first site. A lot of good work. Here's my opinion:

    The "news" title, top right, looks like the headline for the section your in. Its not, right? The text is to large for my taste, makes me feel like I'm in prescool again. The text reads nicely on your background, due to the sice. The windows accessed from the main navigation "loads" in excactly the same place as the windows accessed from the bottom navigation. In the gallery section: Once your in a category, I would like to step back without going to the main navigation.

    It's meant to be constructive critisism!

    respect!


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    pretty nice - a little too much over lap with the menus at times but it was cool-not to confusing-loaded a little slow and ran a little sluggish at times- could have been slowdown or the bottleneck from my RAM being low
    (broadband, ME, 1 Ghz, 128k , IE 5.5)

    the one think I think would really help is if you had your sweet artwork open in a small java-pop up style window that was fitted better for the artwork--the work is so good it gets lost opening up in a big clunky browser window

    overall great job


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    Ok cool

    Well The overlap of the bottom links being like the audio player and the regular windows basically has to happen at this point. If not you wouldn't be able to listen to music and read the sections at the same time. Good thing is though you can collpase the audio player to get it out of the way. Guestbook doesn't work so don't bother with it I think I should probably deactivate it till I get it working. Same goes for e-mail. The news thing is just how I decided to put my updates information. I couldn't think of really anything else at the time and I seen something like it done once on another site so I tried it out. Ok, as for stepping back in the gallery. Once your in the gallery window it has gallery big in the upper left that highlights green when your mouse is over it. Just click it no matter when in the gallery you are and it will take the gallery window back to the category choosing spot.

    Being the site is graphic heavy it has loaded slow sometimes. I run broadband 64MB ram, 700 mhz and it does alright. Better than most my sites have ever done. I like the idea for the pictures though. I'll try that. Check out the ROT site and tell me what you think of it. It only has the bios and synopsis in the about link done. On it I stationed an audion player in the upper right so that it never gets in the way of the main area.

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    sorry

    O.. just in case I hope you don't think of me as just a defender. I hope I didn't sound that way, I just wanted to explain why some things are how they are. If you have an idea of how I can fix some of those problems though I'm open to any suggestions.

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