Site Check Plz ( my own homepage)

[Pen]

http://www.pencheung.com/

Would all of you give me some comment?
it is my personal homepage.
All comment are welcomed.
Thx

[leason]

Not a bad site. I would use more flash and less HTML, although you did well combining them. I really like the music and the background. I do think you could use some more variety in your diffent sections. ie. different fonts, colors, pictures...ect.

Could you return the favor?
http://board.flashkit.com/board/show...hreadid=354085

[KaoZ^Guru]

Personally I don't like mixing html with flash. It's like mixing a cat, and a giraff. Would look... well, i don't know a good word for it.

But this page doesn't look to bad.

I also think you should completely ignore one of leasons comments... the one about using different fonts in different sections.. Stick with one font.
But pics. yes...

Try making the whole page in flash...

Keep it up.

[JuggoPop]

stick with one font... yes

not mixing html with flash... no

not every site has to be 100% flash... and mixing them is not like mixing animals. For one, you need html to put the flash object into a browser... I think they can work well together.

I would consider, changing your font to something little smaller. I use 800 x 600 and I know you designed it for a higher res, but it looks great at this res too (only the font seems a little big)

Lastly, you have scroll bar effects on the main page (splash page) and also on the frame once you enter the site, BUT you don't have them on the window that the frame pulls up in. (I hope you understand what I mean)... anyway, I would add the effects there too, just to make everything match.

Keep up the good work.

[younghistorians]

I mostly like everything. You need to probably change the font to a little more readable one. You also need to make the navigation a little more noticable.

Everything else looks great though. Keep on trucking!

[juxtaman]

1 font, and not the wervy curvy one... nice on paper sh-t on screen.

if you can do it 50% flash go all the way. its' not like you have alot of content either

i don't like the 3rd person narative, your talking about yourself as if you were someone else, it made me thing who's this penchung guy and where's HIS web site, see what i mean, yes you do!

the main problem i found is that when you click on a link you get a blank white screen while the html loads

:P

[hugepanzy]

I find the mixing of Flash with HTML paranoia kinda funny. Hey, if it looks nice, why not? Just so long as it doesn't sacrifice browser compatibility then.. go for it!

The imagery is nice. Something quite different. The one thing I have a problem with is the feeling that I don't want to click on another link because I know I'm just going to see text. So, I would give some thought to something a bit more graphic that would make me WANT to click on another link.

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