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it's clean, functions well... makes for a good business site.
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root
Your intro, make the text and numbers softer, it doesn't match the soft image, the text is too sharp and looks off
"This site requires the Flash 6 plugin - get it Here.
Special Message for Captain You "
loose that.. i'm already in the site so why would i need the player anymore?
whats with the sub game??
The nav and menu looks good and clean, your right the conent does need work and it's a bit plain but all looks well.
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Thats cool. The side bar doesnt work. I like it. You also need to add alot of sound to back it up. Maybe a longer intro too.
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Easy to navigate and clean but I would say it needs considerable 'jazzing up' to make you stand out in a crowded market place.
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great start on a clean site. i agree some subtle sound elements would do alot of good.
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Question Everything.
Like everyone's alreay said, nice and clean. The buttons are kinda bulky. It could use some pizzaz. A few images here, maybe a lil more color there. And sound. Mos def sound. But its a great start. Looking forward to seeing the finished product.
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eh... kinda dry -not a whole lot of anything interesting...
seemed to function well...
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