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Thread: My new website for personal use. (I am only 14 years old)

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    What do you reckon. Post what you think.
    Remember, I'm only 14

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    Senior Member Hiperion's Avatar
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    hi

    very nice of you that you try and make a site and you did!

    a few comments little friend

    -the machine that follows your mouse gets in the way of your actual mouseppointer making it kinda difficult to
    click!

    -choose another font it is very blurry

    the background was nice
    -sharpen your graphics abit

    very nice!
    good luck!

    david

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    the shoeless designer Barefoot Kid's Avatar
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    the look of the splash page is completely different from ur main site, the navigation text is very blurry, that space ship follows the cursor whilst interesting tends to get in the way

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    VERY NICE,

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    LMFAO, did anyone else hit login with entering anything?

    you're one f'ed 14 year-old kid, at least give people some warning if you're linking to that ****.

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    Nice work kid!

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    Originally posted by xen0kai
    LMFAO, did anyone else hit login with entering anything?

    you're one f'ed 14 year-old kid, at least give people some warning if you're linking to that ****.
    ahahahahahaahah!!!

    kids today ehh???

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    ew...........gross dude

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    Senior member? I'm 14!
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    Pretty cool

    I'm 14 too About your site though... The bg graphic is blury( probably enlarged?) and I couldn't read the text in the navigation menu. The spaceship didn't seem to fir the look of the site. It was kick a$$ but needed some fine tuning. I'm coming out with a site soon. Hope you check it out. Cya...

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    Next time can u please warn us not to go in the login section?

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    ????

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    it sucks

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    Its says "Sorry, this site is temporarily unavailable! "
    Ill check again later-

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    Thanks everyone

    I'm really happy that I got this much posts. Thanks to everyone who posted execpt for that ViperGeckoFreak. Dude, as much as I like geckos, I don't like you!

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    Drop the splash-screen, it is really bad. And drop the space ship too, it is nice but very annoying. Is there an actual menu or content? Cause I couldn't find it. And use another background image, this one is all blurred.

    I can see you're going the right way, but it needs a lot of work. Sorry to be so hard, but you come here for honest comments and I give it, hope it helps you.

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    hey, it looks like you know a lot about flash. You really need to work on design though. Some of the elements in there are pretty cool but dont fit with the design, also, everything was pretty big for me, big text, big everything. The podracer mouse obstructed my view a bit, you dont need to make a custom cursor to have a cool site, but i think its cool how you did that. When i saw the splash, i thought it was going to be a cartoony, farmy kinda site, but then i got in it and it wasnt. Try to make things uniform, it looks better and users arent confused so much.

    and yes, clicking login without entering anything wasnt cool. You and most of them members here are underage and should not view that. I'd remove it just so your not looked upon as some sicko.

    good job,
    l83r

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    That was a nice site. I have a few suggestions though

    I would suggest that you change the color of the background so that it blends in a little better.

    One thing that I didn't like about your site is the cursor thing. I didn't quite care for that and I personally thought that it got in the way.

    Hope that helps!

    Michael
    http://www.twofortap.com

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    the bg is blurred, and a good suggestion to make this good for all audience is to cut off the porn

    take it ez

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    Originally posted by nkosi
    to make this good for all audience is to cut off the porn

    take it ez
    what!!! PORN!! WHERE!! *sybersnake gets up and looks around before running straight into a wall*

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