please give me some opinion, thank you very much

[uncle_3than]

Hi, all, this is my site, I've redone it,

http://pages.sbcglobal.net/sfethan/ethan/

haven't fully finish yet...
now I need your opinion,
please kindly give me your opinion,
I need that right now
thank you

and by the way, I'm looking for some internship job
based on flash or actionscripting right now,
please help if you had any information
about that, thank you!!

[Jammin-D]

hmmmmm...

1. splash page using the inkpen script doesnt work at all with the site and its too small to read in that font, try using the same font throughout the page

2. you've got a couple of different fonts on your main page that dont work well together, i just personally find this annoying and doesnt do your site justice, but your work is awesome love your work... and the 3d blocks for each section are cool BUT when you click on each block and it loads up then you choose, i think there should definatly be a preview screen to the right because it just feels better than having the menus blocked over by the screen.


nice site, awesome work, sorry i dont know anything about jobs mate... im a student too just about to start uni studying multimedia, so if you hear about jobs, let me know lol,

Cool site, let me know when you change anything i'm interested to see how it goes,

[Prototype3X]

Need some sound but its ok

[escobaro]

As said before, but some info on what the links contain...Other than that design is cool...

[monstermash]

your getting there..i would tighten up the graphics a bit. is this mx? i'm starting to see a lot of what seems like plug-in scrolling modules.

[Mugen]

Nice look to your site, my main comment would be that you just need some sort of contrast somewhere... Just like on your front page you linked to the flash update in red. You could use some sort of contrast like that within your site. Looks pretty slick over all, your microbians browser worked perfectly and your sections are well defined.

In your portfolio section you may want to pop up a thumbnail when people mouse over each section. Otherwise its too easy to repeat the same piece of work twice.

Good work overall

[vl_aware]

Great start man here are a few things I would look into.

Style sheets for the text on your splash page

and the clients section was going to give me a ceasure cuase of all the flashing I know that its supposed to be a projector but now adays if you have a projector they dont flicker any more if they are hooked up to a comp

Thats about it I bookmarked it to check it out at a later date keep up te good work

Aaron

[uncle_3than]

thank you so much for your
opinion, it really helps me
and makes me go to the next level,
thank you thank you...

I'll adjust somthing and keep you guys posted...

[Jammin-D]

hey i just hope you will help us wen we need it.. this is why we love flashkit.com so much . an excellent opportunity for dumbass's like me to learn off the the top pros who come here!

p.s i think im the only dumbass here actually, lol, but hold up your hand if you want to be one two! we could have a post about dumbass! lol, sorry

[uncle_3than]

Hi, you want me to help you?
sure!!, glad to...

ethan