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on the up and up
What do you think aboutmy site.???
its just the layout with no content. the main buttons work, but im wondeirng what you guys think of the overall design?
www.phaty.co.uk
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"I'll never tell"
Wow! Looks like a smurf puked all over your page.
No offence, but here's a bit to much blue around.
And the pixelated style don't work very well I'm afraid.
I suggest removing the big "home" "portfolio" text on the top left.
And keep all text in that small box.
The text don't seem to fit the box very well though.
A bit up, and to the right and it's there 
Hope this helps. Keep it up.
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::: Pumpkin-Man ::: Cooming Soon :::
www.interactiveatmosphere.tk
"It's like looking in a mirror, only not." Then it's not like looking in a mirror now is it...
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Different text would make a big difference!
Give it a try.
& CONTENT!!More CONTENT!
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Harmony & Justice
Comments/Suggestions:
- A little big too much on the blue.
- Need some more content.
- Pixelated style is kinda different and innovative 
Good work!
Venio
Flash Kit Moderator . Duke University
Thomas Jefferson High School for Science and Technology
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on the up and up
thanks guys will add content, trying to get the over all design sorted first though but i guess i can only tell what it will look like after the content is there.
i like the criticisms i agreed to a certain degree. the blue will die down a little with the content. also the titles are a little clumsy and the type does need work on
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