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[woj1s]

Its finally getting to whree i want it. Any harsh remarks are welcome......what coul i improve on. Keep in mind the content is not all working quite yet. Thanks.

Steve

[EnSanity]

if you want comments its a good idea to post the link

[vatu_leviathan]

[amiwai]

To: vatu_leviathan and EnSanity
The URL is http://www.thewoj.com/main.html

To: woj1s
I like Ur window idea, and the preloader is nice.

My comment:
1)The main page a bit blur, some of the text cannt read.
2)I suggest U create a intro page.
3)Icon on ur window a bit common(no style), and i don like the rollover effect.

[I_am_Tarzan]

just want to say this: We see a desktop window everyday so it's not soooo original to remake a desktop in flash.

[alberto sejas]

... but the icons could be better designed (they are the most important part of the navigation).

Take a look at this
http://www.iconfactory.com/

[vatu_leviathan]

a few thoughts;

thought the idea was alright personally but could have been done better. is quite a dull looking desktop, would prefer to look at that of my pc...

the nicest bit of it was i thought the logo strip at the bottom but as its too far down you can only look at either that or the navigation (although i guess i could drag all the buttons down... :P )

windows arent bad, quite liked the scrolling line thangs.

didnt like roll over either

some of your nav seemed to stick out of the left of the page.

the link to your old sute seems to be missing too.

what the hell is the settings thing supposed to do? all i saw was some circles

woj interactive sounds interesting tho i seemed to get stuck on 38%, tho this could be cos im in a crap net cafe in Laos... :/

let us know when u have it nice'n'polished, would like to see how it ends

[bolt1872x2]

movie aligns left in netscape, might want to put it in a table and center it.