My latest Flash Sites

[rudipooimf]

Check out these two sites and let me know what you think, their broadband needed monsters but i think well worth the wait. One is for iCepts Technology Groups OnRamp X product.

http://www.icepts.com/onrampxtest/

The other is my current website redesigned in flash.

http://www.pixelfader.com/flashsite.asp

Let me know what you think

[label]

Hey... well, its nice but it just doesnt quite cut it in some aspects. First of all (ICEPTS).. how about a splash page.. that would be nice.. it would help the viewer know what they are about to see and if there are any requierments needed in order to enter the page. I saw it at 1024 x 768 and I still got a scroller bar... hmmm
Another thing... those bars bouncing sideways looks a bit amateur... I would take that off. I think the logo for the company could be a bit more creative.. The sound for the buttons is a bit plain and there is no real use for it IMHO... Its a nice site but it needs more seriousness and profesionality. For the looks of it, you could have done a better job on it. It could have been even done in plain HTML.

Next site - PIXELFADER... taking too much time to load.. again Splash page would be good. Im on DSL and its taking a heck of alot o' time to load.... hmmmm..
still loading...
ill get back to you as soon as I see it..

I hope I wasnt to rough... I just want to help you out and point out some things which looked out of place or proportion.

~Label

[rudipooimf]

Thanks for the comments, can't help it on the Company Logo, it's what i was givin to work with. The bars at the top are annoying but again were a company choice. I might pull them anyhow. I'll add in info on the screen dimensions etc. before it's ready for publication.

Paul