version 3!!!

[Lost Student]

hey...

could i have some feedback good and bad.. last time my site was so bad ppl just said.."well never mind"...

http://www.2dworld.com

thanks....

chris...

[Kasen]

Well, it's pretty basic, but not basic enought to make it look bad. None of the buttons work and that sorta sux0rs. But maybe have some more colors and images, ect. Good luck
-Kasen

Deeves Inc.

[Lost Student]

thanks..

will look into buttons (music one not working i know)... i really am sure they do work tho, but they take ages to change the viewer..

cya..

[Lost Student]

38 views and only one person will tell me what they think???

please write anything!!!

cya

[joshmehler]

Hello,

I think you've got a good start. You're going to need to produce something a little cleaner if you want to get work. Black is not the best color (it's scary), and red green and blue remind me of christmass. But, I say keep up the efforts, and you will keep growing.

[jerebear44]

If you've continued to improve it, then you obviously see room for improvement.

I'm gonna say keep working on it. The large amount of black makes it look plain and uninteresting. The jumping from place to place and having so many pieces of content in so many places with no sense of unity makes it also feel like it's not a very well planned site.

It's not a "bad" site, but it can use some tweaking.

- jeremy

[Lost Student]

cheers...

i alway look to improve my work... i think that the little space iv got for content doesnt match the amount of content i have to display so will work on that.. thanks alot will think about diffrent colours as well..

cheers..