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    Opinions welcome

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    I really liked the borders. very nice.
    The butterfly could use a shadow to add some depth to it.

    The textfields for presentations looks like html Times on my computer and dont look good ( maybe you forgot to embed the real font). Also white text with image background is not of my liking either. The white butterfly symbols would be better with a small version of the big in color.

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    Thnx Pellepiano, the font should be Arial so I corrected it.
    Shadows for the butterfly is a good idea
    Last edited by Knorretje; 06-23-2003 at 07:50 PM.

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    Nice flowing site, i also like how the frame is slightly off centre, bit out of the ordinary.

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    wow i can guess that the side part is made in photoshop

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    Yup made in Fireworks and Photoshop. Changed font to comic sans. Liked that a little better.

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    Looks good. There's only a couple things I might want to see different. First, I think I'd like to see more text on the screen at once (ie: while you scroll up and down, there's only about 5 lines of text on the screen at one time... not a big deal at all, but I think you could squeeze a little more in there ) Also, you might want to try and see if you can trim the white pixels away around the edge of the butterfly.

    Overall though, I like the way it came out. Good job .
    Last edited by TrytoAnimate; 06-25-2003 at 11:43 AM.

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    I love the way it pans up the background. I found it a little difficult to read the white text on the green background. Some real nice touches though, with the butterfly.
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    probably be better if you use a landscape not niked off win xp.
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    Oh no!

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    Made some adjustments. True about the background of XP was testing the effect of a darker green gras behind text which looks better. Now I have to look for a background with about same darkgreen gras and sky.
    Than next step smooth animations in the empty "topframe" and a welcome text and all is done. I'll keep u informed.
    Thnx for the responses so far

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    Update

    Latest update:

    -Inserted new background which was edeted in photoshop for better visibilty of texts.
    -Made smooth topframeanimations which will be visible 1 time by clicking on a button.
    -Changed scrollspeed and changed scrollers and made textbox higher for more text at once.
    -Changed fonts.
    -Changed black innerborders made in fireworks.
    -Removed the ugly white pixels of the butterfly by masking them.

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    I like it, although I only saw the latest version. The font came out very nice and crisp and it looked very proffessional overall.

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    nice site, very smooth and I like the borders alot
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    its nice man, but its very similar to http://www.24-7media.de/stzbb/
    i would at least change the photo. Appologies if you designed both sites

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    scrolling is difficult

    It's very pretty.

    One complaint: The scrolling is difficult because it scrolls on mouseover. I like to keep my mouse on the scroll bar and click when I'm ready. With scrolling on mouseover I have to look away from the text to reposition the mouse and then be quick I don't scroll too far and lose my place. Onclick would be easier to use.

    I like it that the background butterflies are different from the ones in the flash.
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    The http://www.24-7media.de/stzbb/ site was awesome. I especially like the animated butterfly and the great deatils of the site.

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    Originally posted by pellepiano
    The http://www.24-7media.de/stzbb/ site was awesome. I especially like the animated butterfly and the great deatils of the site.
    I totally agree, I can't believe that site it's....beatiful, my new fav, and I have never had a fav.

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    Originally posted by bvgroote
    I totally agree, I can't believe that site it's....beautiful, my new fav, and I have never had a fav.

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    i don't usually point out similarities but this one is defenetly very similar to deepcode1's site... although i like the flash/html blending on this one, good work... just loose all the rest and start from scratch, this time with an idea of your own.

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