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    Flash and Illustration Portfolio

    www.aeliusmedia.co.uk

    My current portfolio website. Flash, graphics, illustration and film.
    Comments and crit welcomed.
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    Colors

    Your coloring on the illustrations is really cool. I'd stay away from drag and drop navigations because non-flashers have a hard time with them.

    -NITIN ANAND-
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    Cheers NANAND78.
    It's been up since October last year and I was surprised that only two people have had trouble using it. I deliberately put the disks right next to the abyss so that they didn't have too far to drag!!!!

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    nice guy i didn't have any trouble with the draging

    but i think some people would

    again very nice

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    CRAZY COOL

    I guess because I'm just learning all of this I'm more amazed then most, but I think this site is great!!!!!!!!


    Well done,
    MrMarkess

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    Like the design and interactivity of it. I also like the way you split the loading bars up at the begining to show what items are loading.
    The self of himself


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    I liked the site and I liked the other sites in the portfolio too.

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    Very nice site. It looks clean and professional but still has a unique approach. A few comments. The dark music and dark tone (i.e. "the abyss") don't match the stark white background. i might try something darker. Since the site takes up so little of the window, i think this would look good as a pop-up. Also, i closed the window and reopened it, and it downloaded all the data again, it should be in my cache. It wasn't a long wait, but it seemed a little odd. But i must reiterate, it looks really nice just the way it is. If you're happy with it, don't change it because of my comments. Great Work!! Makes my site look boring.

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    try to avoid using fonts like hong 2 dings as a main look of ur site, ie that angry face

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    Thanks for the feedback, guys. I would have responded sooner, but the mailer didn't tell me I had any replies!

    I've been looking into re-hashing the site since it was a rush-job when I first found myself on the market and looking for work a year ago (hence using a dingbat font for speed). I've just been too busy doing commercial work to spare the time to work on my own portfolio and brand design etc!! Guess I should be thankful for that!

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    I guess I'd like to see a little more going on. The abyss idea is cool, but what's the purpose of it? Why is there an abyss on your site? What is the meaning of dropping the disks down it to load the sections? You should probably provide a little more complete context for all of that.

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    Very nice site, very interesting portfolio. But at first, I couldn't get how to launch any section... The nav izn't simple enough. On the whole, quite good!

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    I don't think the wider context of the abyss is important. In a site which was telling some kind of story, it probably would be, but for me it offered an alternative to simply clicking buttons.

    The site is a year old next month, and I'm about to begin building a new one. By posting this one here, I was trying to guage what worked and what didn't work in this one, rather than looking for ways to improve it.

    I think I made the mistake of trying to do something a bit different, but internet audiences are becoming just like TV audiences, and find it difficult to understand ideas that stray from the path. It's a shame really, as the interactivity in web design is being lost.

    My next portfolio should probably be a plain, straight forward pictures-in-a-box website, no bull****, no confusion, just pointless eye candy.

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    Solid portfolio

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    In "The Business" section fix the first sentence."My can vary..." when describing your rates. Other than that your work is pretty tight, You can draw quite well and your Flash skills are solid. Keep up the good work. Great to hear you've been bringing in alot of work recently. Nice site.

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    Thanks for pointing that out Kendude. And thanks for looking at it in detail aswell - much appreciated!

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    your wokr is gr8...and i need feedback!

    I have just creatd a backdrop/basic layout first cut for my portfolio site ...want to know you comments..
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    Site looks great! Only thing that bothers me is that it does NOT fit my window in IE. Rather than having your movie at a fixed size, why not set it at 100% in your HTML that way your movie will fit any window size!
    scotsworld

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    The website is at a fixed size so as to keep pixel fonts crisp. I was aiming for an average screen resolution of 1024 x 768. Very few of my visitors have a screen any smaller than this.

    The other thing you have to bear in mind is my target audience, which is mostly other design studios - who tend to work at higher resolutions.

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