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    I'm quite proud of this one - like it?

    I just totally revamped my website and even though I don't consider it 100% done, it's pretty close. Would really appreciate some constructive critisizm on some final touches.

    THR33 L3FTS

    Also, be sure to mention what you LIKE too!
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    hi!

    nice layout, with matching colours. but the font is too blurry, i think. why don't you use the transition from mainmenu to subsections in reverse for the way back? that would make the navigation more consistent. i don't like popups

    but: thumbs up!

    greetz

    f-g-c

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    popups?! I didnt see any?!

    Anyway. nicely done, very calm feel to it - the fonts definetely need changing, too blurry, try some pixel fonts for the body fonts and perhaps change the main section fonts to arial or something dynamic? Up to you, either way they are too unreadable.

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    nice use of the links

    the font must be changed i can't read it clearly try the font " Verdana" it's presents very clear for small text.

    and here is a pointer to protect you work from people who like to right click put this code in under the <body> of html file

    then when they try to right click they won't see no panel and no save as



    <script language=JavaScript>
    <!--

    var message="";
    ///////////////////////////////////
    function clickIE() {if (document.all) {(message);return false;}}
    function clickNS(e) {if
    (document.layers||(document.getElementById&&!docum ent.all)) {
    if (e.which==2||e.which==3) {(message);return false;}}}
    if (document.layers)
    {document.captureEvents(Event.MOUSEDOWN);document. onmousedown=clickNS;}
    else{document.onmouseup=clickNS;document.oncontext menu=clickIE;}

    document.oncontextmenu=new Function("return false")
    // -->
    </script>


    nice site
    take care dude

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    Thanks guys. I was thinking the same thing about the font. So I'll look around for one that works better. (I'll check out verdana)

    Just to be certain, which parts are you saying are hardest to read though? Like the text in the "resume" and "about" sections?

    Thanks for the input... keep it up!!!

    P.S.
    The portfolio has pop-ups... just to clear that up.
    Last edited by ThreeLefts; 08-26-2003 at 02:09 PM.
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    Nice work.
    A couple things I noticed.
    First, take the fading out of the four center squares...it makes them hard
    to follow...Secondly, instead of just having the squares fade back in when
    you click the back button, try and reverse the effect of when you click
    on the nav (the square getting bigger, etc).
    This will make t flow better.

    Nice flashing.
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