Template(Number6)

[swishstudios]

Hey everyone!

I made a new template in swish!
Please comment on it.

www.idlegamerz.com/swishtemplates/number6/

[I_am_TheFlasher]

I like it, although it could use a little color, maybe a blue or green?

[swishstudios]

It has a little green.

[I_am_TheFlasher]

Yes, but you have very little, it could use maybe some more, maybe have the little lines under the links be green?

[swishstudios]

Ahh!

I didn't see the swish site check forum! Sorry. Can a mod please move this is you see this? Thanks.

[goov]

I 've got a basical objection. It looks like an 3d gadget/object i know it is not but you put an whole lot of effort in it to make it look that way. But then when it appears you just unhide it from below a white surface! I think the choice for 3d must have his consequence . Also in the way the transistion between the different chapters take place you make it just seem like a screen is changing but i think you will have to make some 3d elements move! this solution is to simple i think.
It will make the whole site more logical coherent.

keep up the good work

[ltheiler1]

I agree with goov's observation that the screen transition. With all of the grey-metal you have in the rest of the template, it would benefit the template to carry that over to the transition. Make it look more like a sheet of metal is sweeping down and two the right.

Just a suggestion. As it's a template, make sure that there is more than one option. Make colors available, make it look like a different texture, maybe plastic...if you have that available, my appologies, but I don't remember seeing it.

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[squidsquat]

wow... finally an intelligent use of swish... I believe that using Swish with pixel fonts and nice graphics can be a serious rival to Flash itself! This site's the proof! (thank God you didn't use any of those swish effect templates... they just look like overused templates for newbies!)

Excellent work my friend!

[supermud]

less than half the area used is for content. i think you can make better use of the space.

[RXGX]

The content area has absolutely no layout. I don't see this template being profitable without content organization of some sort.

[swishstudios]

Thanks for the replies everyone.

squidsquat: Yes, I try to make mine without those swish effects because you can tell they are made in swish.

Will look into things you others have said.

[Veniogenesis]

Swish Sitecheck. Heh.
I can't move it over there, but you can
start a new thread over there if you want.
(However, not many people visit that forum,
so this thread should be okay)


By the way, it looks very good.



Swish can be a powerful tool sometimes.
Don't underestimate it!
Cause if you do, you'll make me mad. Hahahaha j/k


Cheers,
Venio
- Swish Sitecheck Moderator

[mganda]

I like the idea and basic design. I have two suggestions though. One is try using a more widescreen aspect ratio. Squares seem a little boring, plus you'll have more screen for content. The other is that when the lower tab arrow is rolled off the arrow leaving intersects with your frame, but it doesn't on it's way in. Other than those two things it looks really nice.