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Perverse Futurist
Brittany Brazil.net
It's a site for a model/entertainer named Brittany Brazil. Almost complete,just getting some feedback.
http://www.brittanybrazil.net
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hi there
nice site, some comments:
splash screen: the lower part is splitted in my browser. you have to adjust the last slice to the upper ones.
in the site:
the link "posters and photos" does not work
nice and clean navigation.
some of the pictures have too much "dazzling" effect ... and are not rounded well (use some anti-alias)
that's it
greets
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Harmony & Justice
Totally agree with Kent's comments.
One more thing. I see that you've
used pixel fonts on some parts of the
site. Why not everything? 
Great work,
venio
Flash Kit Moderator . Duke University
Thomas Jefferson High School for Science and Technology
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Perverse Futurist
I'm not sure why, not really a conscious decision on my part. Some of it just looks better, but some sections it plays with the spacing. since the site isn't officially done I think I'll change it.
Which pictures are really bad? The main home page image?
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nice looking site, only things I could see:
her outline is pretty chopy on the main page. fonts is kind fo an issue, there pretty small, maybe try switching to a pixel font? You said you had problems with them? if fonts arent on whole number axis's they will show up blured, ie, x=23.45, y=23.45. maybe some simple rollover effects on the "favorite links"? other than that, looks pretty good!
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wow I figured someone would of bashed already
Ok, here we go. Site is not bad overall. Just warning you you might want to change your splash page before the 2advanced rip S.W.A.T. Team gets you. I say this because your splash looks heavily inspired by http://www.taigkhris.com/ .Don't get me wrong the splash looks really nice how you have done it but it and the logo resemble 2a's alot. Nice site overall though. - cheers Tech Designs
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Perverse Futurist
God, wouldn't want that to happen. I see what you're saying though ... maybe we'll change the logo even though that's the logo she wanted for her site ;P
Actually, maybe we'll just rearrange everything so it doesn't have that "look" to it. We'll make it horizontal instead of vertical.
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Perverse Futurist
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Honestly I like how it looked the other way better. I was just warning you about the flashkit rip lynch mob. You need to fix all the spaces though. - Cheers Tech Designs
Flash Developer
Tech Designs Active Media
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Perverse Futurist
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Anything. Anytime. Anywhere.
I agree with everyone elses comments.
Your splash page has major table problems. It seems you design with an 800x600 res? Check in on 1024x768 or higher.
The column on the right has 3 rows, you need to either use a fixed pixel size table [i.e don't use %] or just use 1 row, and put a line break between each image.
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I love boobies(*)(*)
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i like the site. i agree with the other posts and i just have one additional comment. i think you could change the roll over sound. its pretty harch and not too "soft". i think the subject matter needs to be portrayed as soft, elegant, accessable, womanly and the sound you have chosen is sharp, tense and loud.
other than that, very nice work
Jeff
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Perverse Futurist
I see what's being said about the sound, I'll have to find a new one. I saw the comment about the tables, when I enlarged to 1280 x 1024 I saw what you said and it should be fixed now.
Any suggestions on music before we "release" this thing?
Last edited by villain2; 10-10-2003 at 02:22 AM.
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