First Portfolio... please tell me what you think

[Brorobin56]

Ive been doing flash for about a year or so, and just made a portfoli of my design work.. tell me what you think.. all constructive criticsm welcome.

thanks..

http://www.geocites.com/brorobin56

[gmh526]

a working link perhaps?

nevermind, the link works, youve just "exceeded data transfer"

well, i guess ill check back next week or month whenever yahoo gives you more bandwith....

[jeffthedesigner]

thats nice work. i love the interaction with the background images. very cool. the only thing i would suggest is to color it up a bit more. try something other than the grey and black.

well done and very interesting, i hope you can get the file size smaller however, its huge.
Jeff

[mal pacino]

I would love to see it but it is taking forever to load.

I think you should use the loadmovie function an bring in seperate swf files as needed. I have just made my first site after having flash for a few months and I do this. You can check out how fast it loads. I think it will be pretty fast.

Good luck with it

http://www23.brinkster.com/carlos2

[fishie007]

It's very interesting and looked professional to me

but... I can't start the music again after I stopped it

[dayTree]

Man I'm on a T1 line and I had to wait about 20 seconds for the site to load. Once I got to it, it was very beautiful and quite pleasing.

I'd suggest you get a real server--people don't like seeing ads all over, and your site is so big that you are killing your tiny data transfer limit after just a few visits. You obviously have some talent--putting up a little cash (you can find good hosts for 50-60 USD) would be worth it to you.

Awesome work though.

[gmh526]

i agree about the getting a real host part.
this is like the tenth time ive attempted to check your site and i still havent gotten in. "exceeded data transfer limits"