Okay I'm ready

[MrMarkess]

What do you think

http://markesswilder.com/WEBTEMPS/FL...MP9/index.html

Thank you,
Mr. Markess

[Veniogenesis]

Good solid template. Not much to comment
on, but I would like to say that the fish
animation was cool. But yea, nothing
much else to say. But good work.

[MsPamela]

Hi Mark,
Why are you using a transparent gif for your fish. Draw him in SWiSH and bring him to the top of your layers so his colours show better. He looks a bit faded out. Be sure to make that box he is in a sprite and mask it.

Your bubbles look good but they look more like soap bubbles instead of water bubbles because you have used black on the outer edge and put the bright white reflection spots in the center.

The animation on the fish is a bit choppy. On the last frame he should be back to his original X and Y position so that when the animation starts over at frame 0 he does not jerk back. Also you should make some of the bubbles come from his mouth.

On your menu, you should copy each of your text and change them to a grey or black and place it below the white so that it gives the impression of a shadow. Then you will not have such a problem with the white letters fading out on your white gradient.

Just some suggestions. Good luck!

[MrMarkess]

Thank you all very much for your comments, I will use my template as a learning table to try to make all the corrections you have suggested. I'm not well versed on how to do some of the things you said, but I will research and learn. Any help in learning how to do more things would be wonderful, I make a great student...

Well, I will take all the advice, and say thank you...

Mr. Markess