My first swish site!

[dcstreetracer]

Any comments/ suggestions on my very first swish site??!!
http://www.deepblueaquatics.com
Deep Blue Aquatics Online

regards,
James

[calderone]

advices :
add a preloader.-
heavy content ..try to optimize
get rid of the Blue html letters
try to work as a full flash site
and it would be better to group the whole
site in scenes...not in html pages
THIS : http://www.deepblueaquatics.com/shared/feedback.htm
KICK ASS !
I LOVE THE FORM..
im new in sm ...im tryin to learn all
keep the good work !

[dcstreetracer]

There is a preloader!! -- not a very attractive one-- but a preloader non-the-less (I'll make a better one as time permits)
what do you mean by heavy content ..try to optimize?

Were you reffering to the blue First letter in the paragraphs? -- or something else?

I did it as a full flash site first-- but in an attempt to speed up loading, I changed it to individual html pages with individual flash files.

Thanks for the comments... Im new too-- and learning a TON!
James

[Digital525]

Nice site..

Looks like a powerpoint presentation.
try increasing the frame rate, the whole site works well, just needs to be a bit faster, the slowness of it made me think my computer was dying on me.

Nice Job.

[dcstreetracer]

ahh... didnt even think of that-- but agree with your comments! -- Ill make the changes-- Thanks!

James

[Jujumon]

on a design point of view:

you should create graphics that relate to your subject matters (I first thougth this was a technology-related site)

perhaps it needs some water!

[dcstreetracer]

yeah-- thought of that-- but just lacking the creativity right now! It was easier to go with a pre-fab backgroud-- Ill change that on version 2!
Thanks,
James