Neurosis :: My first Attempt!

[ishq]

Neurosis :: My first Attempt!

www.geocities.com/de_herbalist

This is my first Swishmax site!
It took a while to get use to but this is the output!

any suggestions are welcomed!
I really need them...
I have to add audio and an intro.
Also I gotta do some work on the html!
and upload the finished site on the real server!

Thanks for such a great program!
It makes everything easier!

Adrian

[calderone]

cool as hell

[Veniogenesis]

I think it's nicely laid out. I would
recommend speeding up the frame rate
to around 30 or 40 on the movie.
Transitions seema little bit choppy.
But the fire animation is great.
I would also center the whole movie
vertically upon the page. This will allow
more balance. Lastly, I would recommend
spending a little bit of money on some
solid hosting. Geocities isn't the
greatest when it comes to hosting, and
clients are usually not impressed.


Good work!
Cheers,
Venio