heres a site check. not many of those on this forum...

[gmh526]

hey, its almost 2004, theres a good reason to replace my old crappy site with a new crappy one. its not completed yet, but heres a sneak peak:
this might be the link

[alexxlea]

make sure it goes to the flash page, not just macromedia.
looks nice.

[ljd]

Hi

I love the look of your site and the way the links roll down

However a site is more than just a pretty face and what you write has to be spot on as well

Connection does not have a "t" before the second c and you have spelt thick wrong in your "here" section. Also you use commas in the wrong way in the "here" section The only ones needed are after


blah blah.I, gavin blah blah, have made in flash blah blah. Get rid of all the other commas in this section because it's not grammatical to keep them in

Apart from the fact that you cannot punctuate for toffee I think your site is very special

LJD

[J-Luv]

title your document. it still reads "untitled"

[gmh526]

oops, forgot about the title.
wow, someone read the content. i guess i better fix the errors. i hear mx2004 has a spell checker-about time.

ps: "spelt" isnt a word. its "spelled"

thanks guys

[dayTree]

I really really love the use of texture on your site. I love texture and it really made your site attractive.

To be blunt, I hate your splash page. I was trying to go to your site and got macromedia and I was like what the crap. Make it more obvious where to click to get to your site, and make the link to get the plugin a lot more subtle.

Yeah, and even though you were just testing the site, spelling is always important. The purpose of a website is to communicate, above all, isn't it?

Great work, great design.

[gmh526]

thanks.
on high res's the splash is okay, but i know what u mean. i went down to 1152 by whatever and the rollover went crazy and stuff. ill have to fix it.
and i guess spelling isnt my forte

[alexxlea]

Spelt is a word. And he used it correctly. It is either spelled or spelt. Please do not accuse others of poor grammer if you cannot spell.

[gmh526]

man..... chill out dude

the smilly next to my possibly false accusation meant it was all in good humour, just for fun. no need to freak out.
i appreciate yalls thorough check of my site. i take some creative licensing (oooh, i bet i really spelled that wrong) with my words .

thank you

[alexxlea]

lol gmh. all in good fun,