New Site My First Complete Flash Site

[bullieworks]

Pleae take a look at my new Flash Site. I am excited, because I know this one is cheesy and I can improve, plus I just got Macromedia Studio MX 2004. I love it.
www.debscountrycorgis.com
Thank you guys and please do not be to hard. This was my first. My English Bulldog Site is www.docsenglishbulldogs.com I have tons of Flash Slede shows and animation, on it. I am tring to improve. Any comments, suggestions or complaints are welcome. Thank you

[hike69]

for the first try, there is nothing wrong with your site
yes of course there is a lot you could do different
and I am sure will come in time after playing with flash some more
good job
the only thing that stuck out looking at your site I didn't like was the font being used
looks a little outdated
keep at it

HH

[Dricciotti]

maybe up the frame speed on the country corgis one because the intro takes a long time to play through