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business etiquete website
any comment would be mostly appreciated 
www.freshz.com
thanks
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Nice little site. On a 1024 resolution it creates a scroll bar which is a little annoying. Also, the transitions could be a little smoother. Other than that it's a decent looking page, looks pretty professional. Not bad.
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??? how come my website become like that?
i got hijacked????? 
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It looks like you lost your host. Or maybe your domain name? You might want to check out what's going on with your hosting company or your domain registrar.
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*******MENT FOR THE OTHER SITE********
Couple of critics:
1. No good organizational structure.
2. Css? Where is it?
3. Very bad choice of colors.
4. Navigation menu must cganhe.
5. Table must change border color, background, modify them in css and much much more.
6. Logo??? Just put 2 circle together at least.
Sorry for critics...sometimes little bit reading and understanding wont hurt. Just keep exploring  ))
Last edited by tomovuk; 03-01-2004 at 03:23 AM.
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The Excentrifugal Force
Hi Toki,
In reading a site about etiquette, I expect the language to be spotless, or at least pretty good. You're essentially telling people how to do business, so you have to communicate on a professional level, not like kids. There are a number of typos, and the verbiage in general needs a serious rehash by a copywriter, or at least someone who is a good writer. Seriously, if this is a high school project, get someone who is acing senior English on the project. There is not one sentence on the site that is even OK.
Bug: Go to Russia, then see how page 2 doesn't start where page 1 left off, doh!
Regarding dress code in the US, a person needs to find out what the dress code is for a company they plan to meet with, normally divided by suit & tie vs business casual. A visitor may want to wear the suit even if S/he is visiting a casual business, situation dependent.
Good luck!
John
Last edited by SSC Cosmic; 03-01-2004 at 01:17 AM.
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smooth and effective. I would soften the mouse-over its seems to bright.
Excellent. Loads extremely fast.
Art imitates life and life imitates art. - Eric Jordan ( Founder of 2A)
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Originally posted by SSC Cosmic
Hi Toki,
In reading a site about etiquette, I expect the language to be spotless, or at least pretty good. You're essentially telling people how to do business, so you have to communicate on a professional level, not like kids. There are a number of typos, and the verbiage in general needs a serious rehash by a copywriter, or at least someone who is a good writer. Seriously, if this is a high school project, get someone who is acing senior English on the project. There is not one sentence on the site that is even OK.
Bug: Go to Russia, then see how page 2 doesn't start where page 1 left off, doh!
Regarding dress code in the US, a person needs to find out what the dress code is for a company they plan to meet with, normally divided by suit & tie vs business casual. A visitor may want to wear the suit even if S/he is visiting a casual business, situation dependent.
Good luck!
John
hey, thanx for the feedback there!
yeah this is a school project, and i found a lot of typo and mistake... ^^
but our group doesnt have any good writer, thats y we lost at the competition... we got 3rd place and the other group who got 2nd place, had a pretty simple layout(html with frame) but they have a good contents. ;(
anyway, thnx again for the feedback yall!! ^^
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Interesting site, some nice elements, although that F coming up in transitions becomes annoying after about 5 pages.
The english as mentioned lets it down. I also noticed the contact us form has no validation (20 seconds code) and opens a pop up window which then asks to be closed. Much more professional if you have validation and a message saying success within the flash itself.
Very clean and easy to navigate site though!
W.
Each success only buys an entrance ticket to a more difficult problem 
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*insert witty title here*
Hi,
Just a thought on the information on the site. I am think more of this because of the name of the site, 'business etiquete'. I am a little worried that for Australia the view from here says our capital is Cambridge and our landmark is Sydney. When in fact our capital is Canberra located in the state/terriorty ACT (which stands for Australian Captial Terriorty).
Also we have a few landmarks, but the one pictured is the Sydney Opera House.
just thought you might wanna check that and also check up on the other locations. 
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your transition effects remind me alot of the logo yes site.
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Originally posted by wolfie1980
Hi,
Just a thought on the information on the site. I am think more of this because of the name of the site, 'business etiquete'. I am a little worried that for Australia the view from here says our capital is Cambridge and our landmark is Sydney. When in fact our capital is Canberra located in the state/terriorty ACT (which stands for Australian Captial Terriorty).
Also we have a few landmarks, but the one pictured is the Sydney Opera House.
just thought you might wanna check that and also check up on the other locations.
woah, thnx there! yeah we do have alot of mistake
thnx for telling me tho ^^
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Originally posted by stylebandit
your transition effects remind me alot of the logo yes site.
omg u are right!, the map is pretty similar too
the color a lil bit
well, anywya... i never seen that site before, so its kool
im gonna change my transition anyway, since alot of people think its annoying
thnx for the feedback ^^
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