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    Hey guys
    i;ve done a bunch of adjustments to my site, so let me know what you think.
    I look forward to your comments
    Thanks
    Aman

    www.amanjivraj.com
    aman@amanjivraj.com

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    again i tried and the only speed problem i had was w/ the nav bar and i also think that the font should be the same on each page, because the contact page font is almost illegilbe!
    Cheers!


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    hi, few things i'd have a play with if it was my site - see what it 'feels' like:

    - percentage or equivalent on the initial loader, "am i waiting for 10K or 50Megs!", not a big deal for us with DSL, will have more of an impact on dial-up users...
    - little flashing dots on the main site flash too quickly for my liking, started to get annoying, maybe slow them down, smooth transition.
    - transition between areas should have more frames/be smoother, increase the frame rate as well.
    - logo on top left is looking a little pixely? is that intentional?
    - force justified text looks awkward.
    - use a consitant font size for all content areas.
    - dont like how the highlighter/slider stick when the mouse moves out of the menu section. maybe let it return to a dock when mouseout on menu?
    - contact details unreadable on my screen. 1152*862.

    hope that wasn't too harsh...

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    just one last thing.......scrollbars suck....

    I think the site would be better with out.

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    My biggest problem is the justified text. That just looks way to awkward... like a badly printed newspaper. If you want to get really fancy, try pixel fonts also.. blurry font always bugs me.

    http://www.fontsforflash.com/

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    Hey Guys,
    Thanks alot for the comments and suggestions.
    I totally agree with you guys about the justified text, I'm soon gonna fix the text, and change the font to make it more readable.
    N_R_D.. What do you mean by the scrollbar? the menu?
    Please let me know what you mean
    Thanks
    Keep the comments coming.

    Aman
    http://www.amanjivraj.com

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    Originally posted by amanjivraj
    Hey Guys,
    Thanks alot for the comments and suggestions.
    I totally agree with you guys about the justified text, I'm soon gonna fix the text, and change the font to make it more readable.
    N_R_D.. What do you mean by the scrollbar? the menu?
    Please let me know what you mean
    Thanks
    Keep the comments coming.

    Aman
    http://www.amanjivraj.com
    There is a dead scroll bar on the right side of the screen that window puts there by default. If you put

    <body bgcolor="yourbg" scroll='no'>

    in the place of <body bgcolor="#000000">

    it will go away and you site will be clean as hell !

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    Poor, that's what I can say... The menu font isn't appropriate for this. Loads too lon' Not too my taste at all, sorry. The site has a lot to do... and to work on.

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    Tommy_S

    Tommy_S -- I love your work..Vectorizedme webpage is A1 stuff.

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    Re: Tommy_S

    Originally posted by rjbeals
    Tommy_S -- I love your work..Vectorizedme webpage is A1 stuff.
    Thanx, rjbeals. And what does it mean a "A1 stuff"?

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    "A1" just means best of the best.. Your artwork section of the women is great. nice style.

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    Originally posted by rjbeals
    "A1" just means best of the best.. Your artwork section of the women is great. nice style.
    Oh, that's it. Thank you very much.

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    Hey N_R_D
    I fixed the scrollbar problem, thanks alot for the advice.
    Keep the comments coming
    Aman

    http://www.amanjivraj.com

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    31 fps, ask most anyone in the know.
    Have a wonderful day!
    http://www.gpathmedia.com!

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    I dont like the flash version at all.
    frame rate is low, images are grainy, bizzare navigation, excessive animation, broken fonts, font is hard to read. ect.

    The html version is the OK.
    use jpegs rather than gifs cause they support higher color depths.
    NBD:Towknee

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    Hey
    Thanks N_R_D

    and thanks to the rest of you for your critisism... i'm considering redoing the entire flash portion, but while i have this one right now, please give some more advice on how to make it better.
    Thanks
    keep the comments coming
    Aman

    http://www.amanjivraj.com

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