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    Mr Snowman
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    Basic deseign check

    I have been playing with a design for this site. The site is quite small and the price paid does not warrant spending a lot of energy building the site. Any comments on the design before I proceed further? I am grateful for any help that you can give.

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    nice

    I like the cube

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    I really like the smooth movements of the cube. Not to keen on the jaggy images tho.

    The blue is also really hard on the eyes. Or is it just me not liking sreaming colors.

    Gradient on text is not done.

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    Great

    Like the cube thing, but like they said... the images... can u get another one??

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    looks good....

    hi, so far it looks really good, just a few suggestions other then the ones previously posted....

    1- the cube, its AWESOME, however since you have this shadow effect going on in a few places, is there a way to get a shadow on the cube as well?
    2- the white on light blue and blue gradient on blue is hard to read, since u have a yellowish/orange rectangle for the rollover effect, maybe bring that color into your design, blue and orange are great contrasts!
    3- add some more color, if its not a pain to do, in ur transitions from section to section, instead of the gradient overlay on the squares, how about changing the first row to blue and then gradually descrease the color to the bottom row, or however direction you, from top left corner to bottom right might looks best considering ur transition direction.
    4- AGAIN, the cube idea is awesome.

    cant wait to see the updates =)
    Tracy

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    its a bit silly, cubve is odd. images arent clear on the cube and the gradient over the phone number prevents u from reading it.
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    overuse of simple gradients detracts from the site.
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    I cant read the phone number. Lose the gradient. You should be able to make that cube very crisp and clean. Check your export setting or try fixing up your images a little. It just looks dirty and very 1st gen web design.
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    Thank you for your feedback. I will make the changes recommended and repost when done
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