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    Site Check

    Hey everyone, I am new to this site. Please check out my business site. Here- http://www.dmjbpro.com.

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    Not bad, but I've seen better...
    IMHO you'v gotta give user a message: "there's sounds & music on our site , do want them on or off?"
    And "Music" button should be available from everywhere, not just from "Main" or "Home"...
    Keep it up!
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    Welcome to flash kit!!

    Well I like the site very clean. It is a common layout and graphic style. I have seen similar sites posted on here before. I would suggest the following changes.

    1.} Add a music on off button to each page as stated before.

    2.} The frame rate looks a little slow and jumpy. Try setting it to about 30 - 40 fps. You will have to adjust your animations,(hopefully done with actionscript easier to edit) but if not a little time spent on tweening will smooth it all out.

    3.} I didnt like the fonts in the content areas. I cant really suggest a better font but for some reason it just really bothered me.

    other then that good job nice and clean good color scheme and information flow.

    Is pooch potty a real product cause that sh**ts funny yet strangely useful.

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    Have your portfolio open up examples in new windows and turn your music off as it does it.

    That way you allow the user to easily return to your site to check more of your portfolio without having to click the back button and go through your menu again and again.

    XFM

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    Mom said "make me a Mod" el-Ignoramus's Avatar
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    I like it all except for the fonts on the buttons and the text areas, if you can change to a font more similar to the one used in the logo it'll look much better IMO

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    I like the clean feel, but as stated above, this style has been done a zillion times before. So the clean feel alone doesnt do it for me.
    I remember seeing a site that was almost exactly designed like this, but i cant find it anymore.

    Also i found it to be a bit on the simple side, it contains nothing that make me go , it only contains a bit of fading and a little bit of masking.

    Not very impressive

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    Harsh... but true I guess.

    XFM

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    Hmm

    Thanks guys..yes pooch potty is real..

    Alright, i thank flashkit and all you guys for your input and it will surely be put to good use.

    See you all later

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    you cant see us...............

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    Originally posted by N_R_D
    you cant see us...............
    ?

    XFM

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    Originally posted by N_R_D
    you cant see us...............


    Go away, your just a figment of my weird imagination



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