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    Request opinions about my site...

    Hi,

    My first client, my first web design, and it is not working so good like I was thinking...
    I'm still playing around with the sounds and effects, but I hope that someone can give me a opinion about how it looks, or ideas about make it better... Btw, the site is in Spanish but it's easy to understand, or that was my intention at the time to choose a way of navigation. The client is a photo studio & video productions (film, edit, and take pictures of weddings, anniversaries, fashion books, pics of products, air pictures,...)
    Any opinion and tips to help me with this project will be are very welcome.

    Pls take a look here: http://www.estudiomcarmona.com.ar
    THX.

    Greetings Jack
    Last edited by jhjsaat; 04-20-2004 at 11:26 PM.

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    Pretty good, although I have a few suggestions:

    -preloader font: i think it needs a facelift
    -preloader font selectability: why?
    -main page rollovers: maybe move the text closer to the button
    -spice up the services page: its just kinda bland right now

    Well, that's all I've got. Nice beginners site though. Keep up the good work.

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    Thx DaVulf, I am working on all you point's now thanks alot to take the time to check my site!!


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    No problem man (or woman ).

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    I don't speak many languages, so maybe I just can't see it, but where's the sound off button? I think if you want ambient sounds, maybe have something that goes constantly.... and not the same single sound on a constant loop, but maybe a subtle quiet loop on constantly, with other noises triggered randomly over the top?

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    I am a man lol about the sound off button... There is non THX for Your tips assembler!

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