sitecheck please

[MagisterMagic]

Hallo,

i have just finished to made a site for somebody else and i would like to have a site check. Is it ok to put the link here? If not please remove the message!
Don't be to hard on me, its my first one with a template.

thx, MagisterMagic

Info-Mediation

any comments please,...thx.

[Frets]

Nice effect.

Was expecting a bit more swish made content.

[MsPamela]

Ich habe dieses gesehen. Ist dieses von ein template?

Ms Pamela

[dalan66]

Unsure if you speak english.

WOW, your transitions are quite exhausting.
I like the transitions, however, your eyes try to focus the images as they look like they are coming together, and when they do not, you start to get confused. Use one less pass of the glass panes and I think that problem will dissapate or dissapear.

I have more info for you, but if there is a language barrier, I do not want you to confuse my constructive criticism for bashing.

[electrikjesus]

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( I think the lighter side is all that is needed here) :-) Thank you


your teansitions are so slow because you are trying to do too mutch at once. as a fan of meditation you should know that in order for a thing to exist it has to find a balance between evrything around it. 1. your pictures need to be optimized. 2. combine your timeline into multiple scripts, w/ their own timeline. 3. optimize your coding go to the base minimum. no extra's or it will be jerky. 4. pick up a book or tutorial on basic swish design. I'm out