Site check plz

[bail3yz]

Hey,

www.revelationone.net

The angel thing is the bands logo.. its the menu and the sub menu on the right.. under the band page, the picture is also a menu for profiles.

Enjoy!... feedback plz.

[maksum]

Looks pretty good. One suggestion... your scrolling text overlaps part of your logo. Right now it isn't a big deal as you just have your "coming soon" announcement, but when you have more stuff scrolling in there (if you do) it may become hard to read.

Looks great.

Mike

[bail3yz]

Thanks for the feedback,

The scrolling text shouldnt be a problem since its always gonna be just a small comment or something up there.

Worst case I could just make the width less

[hGraf Design]

nice PSing

nav should be a bit easier to find, though

[bail3yz]

Thanks, it took me alot of time to make the fire in photoshop, I THINK it looks extremely real.. Ive had people that thought it was blood tho.. basterds! lol

[ZeroInspiration]

Well I have to agree the navigation should be easier too find. Since it’s a pretty cool looking logo/navigation why not make it the centerpiece. Two ideas for this could be:

#1 Remove that image and use the navigation in the header.
#2 Use the navigation under the header while keeping the image.

I think that the way it’s shaped makes it look out of place when its on left or right why not put it in the center. The image that says Revelation in the header doesn’t look very good, you should try to remake it using the pen tool or recreate it in illustrator. I personally find scrollers very tacky and can honestly say I’ve never used one, I group it with guest books, hit counters, bad gif animations, annoying use of pop ups, and adds that have no relevents to the contents on the page. All of those things should have went out with html java script page transitions and I’m not alone in thinking so, but in the end that’s up to you it’s usually only other designers that have issues with those items.

The copyright is using one of my favorite fonts "copperplate gothic" but you should really lower the size of it, your not trying to draw attention to it you just want it there, it will get seen no mater what but having it that big only makes it distracting. After clicking on the copyright link I like how you did that logo on the right hand side but here is just a heads up on new technology and me being picky. Since flash can use CSS you should look into the capabilities of it. What I mean by that is that when you roll over that logo on the right the cursor changes to a hand so it looks like there is a link. That’s no good it confuses some people since everyone isn’t Internet savvy. CSS has the ability to change cursors to other system standard symbols, as well as many other handy things that I won’t go into now. I use this technique to change the symbol of the cursor on rollover for html form buttons since they stay arrows usually. It’s a good looking site though I think the band will be very happy with it