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    India Beauty.com Please Review

    I designed a new website IndiaBeauty for a client and it is ready to launch .. I appreciate webdesign experts to go through the website and express your constrctive remarks on overall design (Layout, Colors, Graphics, Menu, Header, Footer, etc) .. Your remarks/suggestions really helps me to improve my webdesign skills..

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    well done, the only thing i don't like is the opening page where it saise india beauty, the swirly beveled line that dips behind the pink strait line, i don't like that mabie try and bring it above the pink line or just take it out all together, other than that good layout and good design ! 4 rogers out of 5

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    arg! large tiled background!!

    I think you need to touch up on your flash effects (ie, the flash headers)

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    welcome to the forums here on flashkit!!!

    not to bad!! fonts - the fonts on my screen are blurry, try using a pixel font maybe?? i would suggest not using a lite pink/blue color for the font if its on a white bg, its hard on the eyes and semi hard to read. i would try using a darker pink or blue to get it some contrast and make it easier to read.

    the random images placed on the screen, there is a rollover effect but the images changes in opacity. that doesnt really do anything for the site, maybe when the user goes into each section, the images fade into place but jsut having a simple opacity change isn't working.

    some of the shapes/vectors have very hard edges, i would try cleaning them up a bit and making them smoother. the image of the girl on the main page, remove that glow/outline, makes the girl look abnormal and plus she looks like she's floating in air, try adding a simple shawdow to show some depth and if u want the glow, try making it blend in the bg alittle bit more.

    the web designer logo that you have on the lower right is to bold and big, thats actually the first thing i look at when i opened the site. if ur heart is set on having that bold red box around it then fine, but it would look better considering the color scheme and layout that u chose to do, i would try doing something less contrasty. such as, in a small font, advertise your name without that red box OR make it a button, change the opacity to about 50 or so and once the user clicks on it, changes to 100. i clicked on that link and the site it directed me to is a nicely done site, but it doesnt fit with that logo that u have on the lower right.

    hope this helps, sorry if i was harsh, just what i see

    Tracy
    Last edited by Tracy981; 09-11-2004 at 09:51 PM.

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    The colours and layout give the right kind of feel for what the site is about.

    I agree with Tracy, the 'Designed and Hosted by...' needs to be consistent with the rest of the site - it's a little too attention grabbing at present.

    I think you could make more of the navigation, it's maybe a liitle plain/missing something at the moment, especially since it's the only thing on the top quarter of the page.
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    I 'gree with the tiled bg...too overbearing for such a pink, light-toned site.

    good layout, though. I think that you need a logo of sorts, also.
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