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  1. 10-08-2004, 03:02 AM #1
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    First try at Vector Art

    This is my first try at vector art. Please tell me what you guys think. Thank you.
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  2. 10-08-2004, 07:22 PM #2
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    that's pretty good
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  3. 10-08-2004, 07:50 PM #3
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    First or fiftieth try, that's pretty dern good.
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  4. 10-08-2004, 07:59 PM #4
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    Thanks so much for the feedback.
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  5. 10-08-2004, 09:20 PM #5
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    Here is another vector art image that I made. It is a doom 3 comic strip.

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  6. 10-09-2004, 05:43 AM #6
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    looks nice, one think I would change is "got root?" it doesn't look right, it is too big for his T. try to use smaller font size.
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  7. 10-09-2004, 03:20 PM #7
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    Nice style!
    I agree with the text on his t-shirt in the first image.
    I like the comic strip
    Keep up the good work!
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  8. 10-09-2004, 03:25 PM #8
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    I edited the text on the shirt.

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  9. 10-09-2004, 11:32 PM #9
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    the text looks better now.

    Also, one thing, the lips just dont seem right. I think it may be the white color. No idea how to fix it, but just a thought.


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  10. 10-10-2004, 01:53 AM #10
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    Supposed to be his teeth.
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  11. 10-10-2004, 07:50 AM #11
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    ah, now I got it. Took me a couple of seconds though.

    perhaps continuing the line all the way to the other side of the teeth will make it easier to define?

    Or maybe my mind is just slow


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  12. 10-10-2004, 10:05 AM #12
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    i think you should just nix the teeth.

    your style is very similar to the william joyce cartoon called "george shrinks"...

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  13. 10-10-2004, 12:24 PM #13
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    I have never seen that cartoon.
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  14. 10-10-2004, 03:05 PM #14
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    like the character... based on somebody perhaps?
    like to see him animated...

    oh and the Doom 3 comic is so true
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