[screens] My New Toon(egg syndicate)

[SergeantK]

I am making a new toon. Here are the screens:
Egg Syndicate
Please rate/give comments.
EDIT I haven't done backgrounds yet.

[yojo]

I'm not exactly sure what I'm looking at. Do you have a story or storyboards worked out that you could show us? Killer egg, Ha, verry origional!

[SergeantK]

OK, heres the story:

A rotten egg works for a syndicate (haven't found a good name yet). His goal is to kill all Eggians (the name the syndicate gives anyone who isn't with them), but he gets a target to kill. He kils the target, then starts his Egghunt. Thats all I have so far.

PS: You really think its original? That sounded sarcastic...

[yojo]

NO not sarcastic, sarcasium doesn't work with typing... It's a cool idea. The bad guy being the "rotten egg" who wants to kill all the normal ones. Originality is always most important. Make sure to make him green and moldy! Maby throw the Easter bunny in there some place since its about eggs. Maby as the CEO of the syndicate... Good luck, and make sure to post your progress.

[SergeantK]

LOL, a great idea to use as a secret! I will sneak that in somewhere. But being green and moldy, no. Oh yeah, I have the first background done (just not in the screens)