First site :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[tyzoo]

http://www.tylertherobot.com/flash/

first site flash wise

[incognitos]

hey tyler,

i took a look at ur site.. and i was very impressed tat it was ur first site...

now for a few suggestions:

1. You should remove the box at the bottom, where it says www.tylertherobot.com (its useless and ugly)

2. I think you should make the background colour of the body content grey like the rest of your site.. so that it can 'flow' better.. the black kinda throws everything off.

3. I suggest that you make the scrolling arrows in the body content box smaller, because their too big.

Good luck, i hope i have helped

[carly1979]

yeah i agree, either get rid of the box at the bottom, or if you wanted to use it as a link back home, then just make it much smaller. it is huge, and getting rid of it/ reducing the size will leave more space for the content!

but yeah i generally agree with all incognitos' comments....