can someone help me ?

[etgraphix]

i'm supposed to make a website for a hip hop dance crew in boston and i was wondering if you liked the designs i have or if you could make better any ideas reply please .

[VODKA MONKEY]

There really isn't much to say about your design so far, it's not even at the "bar bones" level.

But, what I can say is this:

Before you do any design work (in Flash or whatever program), think about the navigation of the site, think about how people can access the information they need in a hassle-free way. No one really cares how "flashy" your site is, if they have a hard time finding the information they need, they won't come back to it.

I recommend reading a book called: "Don't Make Me Think", it talks all about that stuff, there's also tons of websites that talk about information architecture/usability.

Good luck.

This is what I think, others might disagree.

[etgraphix]

thanks i alredy have the site moving but i couldent get the flash file to link to flashkit i was in a rush so thats just the pic thats why