Awesome Site, take a sneak peek

[joshuaaaronalpe]

www.513studios.net
Hello everybody, I have my new site up. The content is not fully done, but the template is. I just would like some people to look at it and tell me if I need to tune it up or do whatever, any critique would be helpfull. The site is www.513studios.net (click on the area where the white line was after its gone, then it pops up).

Thanks. º¿º

[sense]

Think you'll get better response in 'sitecheck' forum.

[The RZA]

I have to agree with sense on this matter.


gentlemen,

[nerv_03]

yeah this does belong in the "Site Check" forum.

But anyways, I'll critique your site and ask some questions:

1) Why does your site have a paper flying through when you click through each section? How does this relate to 513 Studios? Why portfolio paper?

2) Almost 1/2 of your site is not utilized. Since you seem to have a decent amount of content, I would try to utilize that space.

3) Is your content easily accessible to your clients and does it give the information fast and quick?

4) I'd format the text in your Q. and A. It makes my eye just slide right through the content without stopping. I'd suggest reading about information design and typography. I'm not fond of the scroll bar to the right.

Overall it still needs a lot of work. The site is just not holding itself together. The logo, the menu, and the content feels like very separate entities. I hope this helps. Goodluck!