Work in progress Critique???

[dwyermm7]

Hi all,

Working on updating the portfolio. Still working on it but getting closer to the end... I can see the light!

Let me know what you think.

http://homepage.mac.com/michelledwyer

[whytefly]

not bad at all,
i didn't know what to think of the brown stars floating on the main screen, but nice portfolio.

[dwyermm7]

Thank you

I was thinking about trying to make the stars glow slightly when they bump into each other. What do you think?

[Drno]

Ditch the stars. I would maybe grab a couple more photes like the one you have there and do some cool motion blur transitions between them.