hi new here this is sort of long but plz read

[TreDepth]

ok here is the run down from the time I was a kid I loved games and designs. I grew up yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee took long enough, haha anyways I am 21 now and 3 years ago I was introduced to photoshop 7 by some friends of mine they showed me a TEXT effect and left me for a week. When they came back they were amazed, hehe.

Anyways again and again I grew and I tried my hand at flash for the first and only time this is when I was coming to the realization that what my father banned me from doing was exactly what I wanted to do.

1) Become a Graphics Designer
2) Start my own Graphics Designing Firm
3) Get into the Professional Media Advertising Realm
4) Eventually learn hoew to make an entire flash cartoon
5) Someday Make a Video Game

ok I am 21 now and I have accomplished goal 1 and I am partially getting to goal number 2 just need to Register my company, btw I live in Barbados and in 2 days I have a meeting with a gentle man that is going to introduce me into the tips and trick of the Media Advertising Market so goal 3 is on the way also.

ok when I was 18 that was when I first had the idea of starting my own Graphics Firm but I was too young and immature to do it but I tried my best at making my first ever flash site well after 7 month of learning flash and making the design in PS7 I was nearly finished when my laptop crashed, I was shattered I lost it all but I have an unfinished uploaded version on the net at this link

Below is the link just put 'www' before it please
.freewebs.com/tontocutter/Stylerz%20home%20page.html

if it is possible I would like some C&C on it and the buttons work and most links, I have not done flash since I was 18 since the laptop crashed but I know that I can do much better than that I have alot to learn all over again but I am ready for hard freaking work all over again. If I could get some help from some of you pros that would be nice just add me to your hotmail if it is not too much to ask TreDepth@hotmail.com but for now I just need some C&C on this first and only ever try at FLASH.

I have alot of questions but I will do that in a follow up post after the C&C in this one if I get any, haha. Sorry for being so long but this is just me I make long posts on every forum that I frequent.

Anyways have an awesome night or morning and may GOD's Blessings Be Abundant In Your Lives

btw C&C means Comments and Critismn I am saying this because I posted this is another section of the forums and someone asked what C&C was hehe

I changed the link sorry but everytime I post it the link looks normal but then it changes when I Save the Changes anyways if you could take a little time and copy and paste those 2 segments of code together you will be led to the site

[alty29]

just so you know, you can only have a footer size of 300x40. but they do look nice

"We are sorry, this page was not found. FreeWebs offers free websites and web hosting to millions of web users."

check the link, not working.

[TreDepth]

ok I fixed the link problem but you have todo a little trick because it is acting wierd when I post the link

JUST put 'www' before the following LINK EXTRACT and it should work

.freewebs.com/tontocutter/Stylerz%20home%20page.html

thanks alot looking forward to all critismn and commnets GOOD, BAD or GOODLYBAD, hehe

[fallacy]

you know there is software that will convert that .swf on the server back to a .fla

http://www.*******.com/flashdecompiler/

[DannyCasio]

you know there is software that will convert that .swf on the server back to a .fla

http://www.*******.com/flashdecompiler/

ppl can steal my work??? my action script and all??? how? my .fla's are like 10mb, my .swf is like 400k, plus, if i wish to protect it from import, it could still be done?

[robbmcaulay]

ppl can steal my work???

I wouldn't worry about it...

[DannyCasio]

I wouldn't worry about it...

are you insulting me, saying no one would want my work...you you...big jesse! I heard thats insulting while watching Craig Ferguson's show to all celtics.

[alty29]

erm, that isn't exactly a good thing to be posting on FK

Onto the site. I have 1280x1024 resolution, and your website does not fit into it. Try making it a bit smaller, you could have much smaller resolutions visiting your site. Overall, it looks like the mutant child of several other sites. It is scattered and nothing seems to go together. You should try pixel fonts, and better colors. Instead of having each link open in a new html file, just load in swf's, will look loads better.

[DannyCasio]

well your self esteem sure is healthy. your design looks somewhat cheap, i liked how the shape tween started, but then it went to ****. graphics company's are a dime a dozen, it doesn't matter the skill so much as finding consistent clients. see my work here...




www.geocities.com/dannycasiodesigns
www.geocities.com/dannycasiodesigns/octagon.html

[robbmcaulay]

www.geocities.com/dannycasiodesigns
www.geocities.com/dannycasiodesigns/octagon.html

I know we should be subtle and respect everyone's work but...

BWWWWWWWWWWWAHAHAHAHA

This is a g-rated forum

[DannyCasio]

I know we should be subtle and respect everyone's work but...

BWWWWWWWWWWWAHAHAHAHA

This is a g-rated forum

again, are you laughing with my site or at my site?

[robbmcaulay]

again, are you laughing with my site or at my site?

At it, remove the link...

[krona]

At it, remove the link...

Lol.

Forget suttlety, robb dives in with the killer blow. Typical scotsman

[J-Luv]

At it, remove the link...

yes, he sure isn't shy to speak his mind, lol. "remove the link" lol, quite demanding....cant be that bad - i didn't click on it though....

[admedia]

what the hell is going on in here?

[robbmcaulay]

I'm not asking (telling) him to remove the link because the design offends my eyes! I'm asking (telling) because of the content!

Keep FK tidy

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