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    Corporate site check please..

    Hey everyone! I just wanted to quickly post something new that im working on.. Its nothing too fancy, Html with a flash header, But I rarely design this corporate, so I would appreciate any feedback that you can give. The main things that Im looking for feedback on are:

    1) the flash header.. I know this needs to be tweaked a bit.. I want to enlarge the text i think - does the orange strain your eyes? (i know i spelled "business" wrong).

    2)Just an overall design critique.. I realize that this is a corporate site, but do you think it could still be jazzed up a bit graphically? I have some testimonials that I need to sprinkle throughout the site and i thought i could use those in addition to some random, corporate stock imagery..

    3) any other random likes / dislikes are appreciated..

    Thanks in advance for the feedback. I appreciate it!!

    http://www.porticoproject.com/nix/career/index.php
    P.S.- This is what the alphabet would look like if Q and R were eliminated
    - Mitch Hedberg RIP

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    you should have backgrounds and graphics behind the body text. the slogan/animated text in the banner is very hard to see. the layout otherwise is good.

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    Thanks alot for the feedback. I will work on those things and repost!
    P.S.- This is what the alphabet would look like if Q and R were eliminated
    - Mitch Hedberg RIP

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    It is a good clean site.

    I'd try making a better pointer arrow on the header animation.

    You could also play a little bit with the text area and add some borders to it or something.

    Check out http://keypoint.com/portfolio/index.html for reference on various things you can do with typography to make it still look corporate but a bit more playful.

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    NANAND78 - Thanks for the link to keypoint - That is a good site with some good ideas. I will definately play around with the text... and yes - I do need to make a better pointer arrow - Thanks for the feedback!
    P.S.- This is what the alphabet would look like if Q and R were eliminated
    - Mitch Hedberg RIP

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