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    business/portfolio site - crits needed

    long time since i've posted here, i was hoping to get some crit on my flash site.

    link - http://www.wysterrya.com/eption/

    thanks

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    I'm guessing there shouldn't be any content, just the functionality?

    Everything looks fine. I'd suggest using some transitions between the different content. There is a great tutorial on kirupa.com that shows how to do it. Just makes everything smoother.

    ~J

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    thanks for the reply

    i havent really decided whether or not im going to have transitions between the content, simplicity is kind of a theme im using for the site...

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    Alright I guess. If you don't put any fades or transitions between the content, It could be done it html.

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    Adobemedia is right. Is there a reason it's in flash?

    I'm not a big fan of the "jumbled" navigation buttons. Kind of a good concept, but it lacks structure.
    It must be obvious day at camp stupid

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    i think you have the beginnings of something good. It's for a design company right?

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    Try making the buttons swing or do something when you roll over them.

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    thanks for the replies

    i agree it could be in html... at this point that is

    i will add some animation to the buttons and make it more "interesting" soon

    i guess im really just asking for a crit on the design

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    Once again I thing you have the beginnings of something there, nice stitching effect and colours - nice and subtle. Please don't go adding loads of rubbish effects just because it's in flash - just a few nice transitions as somebody mentioned before.

    What business is Eption anyway?

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    definetly not going to be adding "rubbish" effects, i hate when people feel a need to have all that just because it is flash. i will add some transitions once all the content and design is sorted out.

    for now i just want some crits on design and your impressions

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    Adobemedia is right. Is there a reason it's in flash?

    I'm not a big fan of the "jumbled" navigation buttons. Kind of a good concept, but it lacks structure.
    Yeah!!!!!!!!! I am right for once!!!!

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