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    blublack.com for review

    Just finished this site. Wanted to let people take a look and give crits

    Thanks

    http://www.blublack.com

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    Not bad. a simple, understated site which alows the work in your portfolio to take center stage.

    I really liked the falling leaf preloader.

    I was a little confused by the concept, is the blue backgroud meant to be water? if so, maybe try making it look a little more watery, add some reflections maybe?

    Also, it took me a while to figure out that those leaf things operated the thumbnail scroller, but maybe I'm just dumb.

    Hope this helps.

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    thanks.

    Yeah it is supposed to be water. It is not very obvious. On one page the leaves float up but otherwise the concept might not be obvious enough.

    I'm going to see if I can figure out a way to make the water theme stronger for the background

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    I don't like how the leaves move on the homepage...it is just too pixelated. Once the leaves move onto the screen, just stop them there.

    Also, don't make people click on the text to enter the site...

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    Nice and simple. I do not like the ripple effect though when the leaves fall. It's kind of cheesy.

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    Not my style... Yeah, it's nice but not my fav... The layout could be worked out much more, the animations could be much more exciting, and you could add a "percentage" to the loading leaf ( it's kinda anoying to see that animation and not knowing whne will it end )... Work much more on the layout...

    Regards,
    Biro

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