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    My new portfolio site! Would love some criticism and advise!

    Hi everyone! I just got my portfolio site just about finished. i would love some criticism and or advise. anything you got! lay it on me! tell me i suck. tell me i rock.. i don't care. i just need to find a new job so i got this site up. I do freelance and fulltime graphics... send me an email..

    www.jarretgabel.com

    Thanks dudes!

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    It's nice. I think the loading should be done within flash though. That's the beauty of it, you can keep the website on one page without big white patches appearing once you click a link.

    Other than that it goes together well.

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    the diagonal lines are killing me...way too much of them. They go through everything, change your opacity of the content boxes so they stick out more against the lines.
    And the page not being centered is killing me too, but i guess i can understand it works either way.

    There seems to be just a Tad bit too much blue going on...not a whole lot of colors that draw the eye to any point in the page. But, maybe once you fix the scan line problem, i might change my mind.

    The loading of the pages and the nice effects you have are great and i think you've got a great site. you've got some nice work too.

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    Look Pretty Good.

    I would centre the site on the page for better viewing in larger resolution browsers. But that's just me...

    Ciao..
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    I agree with the other guys. I'd drop the diagonal lines, they are a little distracting! I think maybe you should also stick to one font, or stick to a sans serif family?! Other than that, great stuff!

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