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    Latest CSS/XHTML creation now finished

    Hello,

    Would greatly appreciate your feedback on my latest creation:

    www.betaris.co.uk

    Thanks Guys

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    hilarious typo!

    Dude, the first thing I notice is the typo:
    "Let us asses your workplace"

    "asses" is the plural of "ass" or "as" (a Roman coin), you meant "assess". I'd change that quickly

    FM
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    another grammar error

    hey,

    while I'm at it...

    under your "submit email address", you have:
    "We respect our client’s privacy."
    This implies you have exactly one client. the plural form would have the apostrophe after the "s" as in:
    "We respect our clients' privacy."
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    if you go first
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    Your videos at:
    www.marksman-int.co.uk
    didn't load for me - in Firefox 2.0.0.2, I just got text in the popups. The popups crashed my MSIE.

    FM
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    Thanks...

    Thanks for pointing out the typos dude.

    I was really after some technical/design/usability type feedback, Thanks anyway

    I didn't design the Marksman International site, a colleague did

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