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Mom said "make me a Mod"
Two's Company
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and you might as well drop by my DA account and encourage me a bit, I'm after all a struggling artist
Two's Company
Me, Myself and I...
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i love the concept. but there are a few things about the photo that don't work for me.
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I like the idea of it...walking on water under the permanent threat to slip but the stepping stones give you a safe walk...uphill !!
At least that is what I read
Don't like the boat behind you...you should be 2 steps more to the left!
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not sure why i didn't say what i don't like about it (sorry!).....
i don't like the boat behind the head.
and i don't like the blown out effect on the rocks and on the left hand side.
but i do like the 'stepping position' the person is in and the reflection looks cool.
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Agree with the boat but like everything else about it
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Mom said "make me a Mod"
Thanks for the comments guys, At first I was like Carly, what don't you like about it...??
OK, Now this wasn't me, it was an asian guy among a group of tourists they decided to walk on this line of stones, I was quite away, and the other shots away from the boat didn't have the Stepping position which I liked the most, hmmm I'll post another less contrasted copy and you guys tell me what you think about it
I considered removing the boat, or at least replacing it with a section from on of the other shots, but that would be against my -No Photo Editing- policy
So I'll post a regular contrast version, and one more with a different angle, hopefully with less boat in it
thanks for the help you guys
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Mom said "make me a Mod"
There you go guys, the new edited version
C&C are more than welcome and I posted them both for ease of comparing
Two's Company V1.0
Two's Company V2.0
Last edited by el-Ignoramus; 04-14-2007 at 05:46 PM.
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Much better. Maybe a LITTLE bit more with the water but I like 2 way better then 1.
good work.
"Let us declare nature to be legitimate. All plants should be declared legal, and all animals for that matter. The notion of illegal plants and animals is obnoxious and ridiculous."- T. McKenna
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In agreement with wannaBe...a tad more water effect would do good here
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Mom said "make me a Mod"
Originally Posted by WannaBe_80z
Much better. Maybe a LITTLE bit more with the water but I like 2 way better then 1.
good work.
Thanks Wakka Wakka Glad you like it man
What do you mean by a little bit more with the water??
It looks a bit dull I know, but it was a very Grey day, more blue with the water will the render the guy a different skin tone
I'm thinking of a B&W or a Sepia version of it...
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I said water effect but that is not really what I meant to say...I would like to see more of the water surface not only some ripples.
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Mom said "make me a Mod"
Ahh OK
I think I know what you mean now, the problem as I mentioned above it was a very Grey day as well as the sky's reflection, so in order to get the sea to look like one, I'll have to tweak the levels heavily and end up with an orange guy or so
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yeah i much prefer the second one.
i agree with frex and wannabe i think about the water. you'd probably have to seperate the man and the water to separate layers so you could alter the water while not touching the man. not sure how much you could do with it though in PS, and i know you don't like doing too much PSing of your photos anyway
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Mom said "make me a Mod"
I think I can get away by having the guy's face only on a separate layer, and then toying with the levels of the rest of the image, I can live with a slightly bluer shirt, but not an orange face
Hmmmm, version 3.0 coming up soon
thanks everyone
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