Omw...
Sweetie.
No.lord this calls for a rough mock up.
I hope you're happy, you made me open photoshop.
Right. Lets start on your table here.
1: Your cell sizes are a little out of preportion.
You have way too much negative space (unused space) in your title, either fill it with pretties or scale it down, likewise with your text area, placing the medical symbol on the page like that only draws more attention to it.
2: Text Placement. A website is like a magazine, your text placement needs to make sense in order of reading sequence. Again, how you've placed your text here only emphasizes the huge void on your page.
3: Colors: .... Too much! Too much blue... The dark color on your text area just isnt practical, 1: It makes your text really hard to read 2: Its overpowering to the viewer. Try going for a lighter shade of the blue you already have in that area. It will help break your page up.
4: seeing as how they deal with skin treatments, nails, and hair, why not add a few images to illustrate this? On review of your page the first thing i thought was that they were strictly health medical.
I've done a little mock up (quite rough) to illustrate what I mean.
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