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    Jinx_Dojo
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    Critique, Any ideas for improvement ? whaddaya think

    Whats up fellas n ladies? I havent published anything since the Eola crisis
    so I fought with that bs for about 2 or so hours before I realized I needed to whip some java up. What were they thinking .... Any way.
    Its been a LOOOOOOOOOOONG time since I've done anything seriously with
    flash / html ect, however recently a family member of mine aquired
    http://www.dawgwoodkennel.com
    She asked me to generate a page and bam there it is.
    I'm a Html development enthusiast I suppose you could say
    and I LOVE FLASH! its so much fun. I'm debating on returning to school
    and attempting a career at graphic design """ Anyone wana take a look at my most recent work and tell me to give up or keep going????
    Thanks in advance p.s. the page is kinda big file size wasnt much i could help i dont think.... maybe some one could coach me on that : )

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    It's a good start, keep it up.



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    FK Rocks..!
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    I recommend you align the flash to the center of the screen and add some attractive html background that will enhance ur site's look on wide screen monitors...

    Good work ... keep it up
    Waqas A.M. Siddiqui (Vicky)
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    Hi it was very very slow to load, for the amount of images displayed it should be loads faster, design looks ok, not a fan of the duplication of the images, quite a few are the same on pages.

    I expected far more site (funky stuff) for the loading time...

    As an after thought you could have built it in html (much faster to load) and have a few right hand side animations (like you have now) also more seo friendly

    D

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    Jinx_Dojo
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    Thanks for the insight I'll use all of your suggestions the new version should be available soon

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    I thought the site is cool. I especially love the little dog feet that trail the mouse. However, it does take forever to load.

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    Yep thats the main problem ( File size ) I've reduced the resoloution of the images, I've changed the file extensions to jpeg, I've even turned some of the jpeg to Vector but the file size still still doesent seem to make much
    of a difference on the load time, does anyone have some great info on
    helping load time? "maybe the server has the user bandwidth severley reduced ???" or maybe i just dont know what i'm talking about any ideas??
    I think i'm out of em *sigh Thanks in advance you fellas have been a great help

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