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    dawn...

    ...played around with photoshop and I like the creepy touch I could add to this shot

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    He has risen! lefteyewilly's Avatar
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    it's too much pp. Your masking and recoloration of the bkg is off and the sharpening seems uneven so the photo has 2 different feels between the clock and building.

    I'd venture to say if you just cropped to the clock and removed the building, it'd be a better balanced image.

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    Highly appreciated critique!
    Thank you!
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    dIgital pHoto dude! TheEnigma's Avatar
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    Yeah I tend to agree. I think it would look better maybe with just some tweaking of the curves, not too much tho! The clock really doesn't look natural!
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