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    Quarantine Work - Request for Critique

    During quarantine I worked on an adobe air app business card, who agrees on the format?

    Designed on the adobe spark app.
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    Moved to its own thread. Hope you get the critique that you're seeking instead of being buried in another thread.

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    is it just me or the text is a little bit off to the right?

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    Yeah, I should use the divider line to center it.

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    new design idea for adobe air app, free layout:

    anyone have a submission to show?

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    Design looks rather dated (ex. the glow around the text) and the important text is pushed into a corner.

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    Someone should post a good design .

    Another idea: the app is free to download, the physical money is paid in person and the code allows the app to continue and gets remembered in a cookie.

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