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  1. 10-20-2001, 11:30 AM #1
    faisalpower
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    Hi Guys,
    This is our office website I have created this website I also created introduction movie for it by swish 2.0. I am 19 years old, I have not learn in any insiteute HTML,JAVA and Swish i have learn by myself.
    So please check it and tell me
    Thanks in Advance

    http://www.habibco.50g.com

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  2. 10-20-2001, 01:51 PM #2
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    I don't like that algerian font, even Areil would be better. The intro uses too many text effects. Just because they exist doesn't mean you have to use them. I suggest you tone it down a little and show more of the equipment.

    The colours on the main main look bizarre, but maybe that'sis what you intended. The menu on the left is a little strange. You spell 'welcome' as wellcome twice.
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  3. 10-20-2001, 04:04 PM #3
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    Well, I'm on a cable modem, and that intro took quite a while to load ... So, I'd hate to think how long it took for a Dialup modem ...

    Just a suggestion, but I'd put a "Skip Intro" HTML link below the movie, to give people the option ...

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  4. 10-20-2001, 05:00 PM #4
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    to many java effects
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  6. 10-22-2001, 09:32 AM #5
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    to many pop ups also ..
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  7. 10-23-2001, 07:21 PM #6
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    Yes, the pop-ups suck

    I hate going to a retail site and getting pop ups about other companies. I expect them in portals and I avoid sites with multiple pop-ups. Also I agree about the font. It looks a little cheesy. I would show more equipment, after all that appears to be the focus of the site. With a little work you'll have a kick ass intro.

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  8. 10-23-2001, 11:53 PM #7
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    It's good for starters.

    Get rid of those javascripts you have on that page! It's a clear indication you're an amateur. I don't recommend this for a business site. You need to tone it down.

    Don't get me wrong ... for someone who's just learning you're doing a great job.



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